On Monday we watched a short film, We had to create a DLO about one scene from the short film. The scene I choose was when the young girl walked to the little shoe shop and saw nice heels. Feels free to leave a comment to improve my work!
Wednesday, 20 May 2020
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hi liv this is interesting i like how you were describing there actions and how they feel. and i liked how you were describing the people i really like how much effort you put in to this work of yours good job with the work.
ReplyDeleteHello Liv! I really like your Scene from that. I like how you explained what scene it was from. This was a very good Scene!
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